It's a good game, I see a lot of potential in it. I liked the relationship development with the characters, the relationships don't seem rushed. The graphics are nice and girl models look great. I liked the story, it's enjoyable and not very complex, but it's interesting to follow. The only significant flaw is the sex scenes, they are standard animatiot from HS2, not much dialogue, which makes the scenes look faded and not exciting, although there was the same problem at the beginning of "Once in a Lifetime" development, so I believe this will be fixed in the future, gaining experience. I've played 100+ AVNs and I see a lof of potential in this novel. I apologize for my bad english, I use a translator as my knowledge is zero.
I’m glad to hear you like the story so far and think it has potential. I really appreciate it! And I’ll try to add more dialogue to the sex scenes in the future to make them more interesting. I did make the animations myself though but I wanted to start with some vanilla stuff first. Once the story gets further along I can start adding a lot more things!
(Your english is perfectly understandable btw, so don’t worry about that ;))
I don't know if this was intended, but in version 0.3, if you select "Convince her to stay out of it", appears on the screen "Sophia didn't like that", but sophia_romance is still +1. Line 297 of the version3.py file. I'm sorry for my bad english.
Hello again, the update is great. Models are still on point, especially the new characters. The story is still interesting. Tbh, I can't say much it's just that good.
A bunch of people are waiting for the discord server so I hope we can have that soon. :)
Hey want to ask, thanks for releasing it on Android finally!!..... I want to know how can I continue the game without having to start over. Is it possible or are you figuring this out?? And will there be a future interaction with the little sister? Really wanna know excited for the update. Probably the best adult visual novel ever!!
Wow, thank you so much! Are you trying to continue your save from pc on android? Because I don’t think that’s possible. And there definitely will be more interactions with Sarah, but it might take a little more time before she warms up to you… ;)
Not really from pc to Android but I played it on my phone. It's as smooth as it was on pc. Will I be able to continue the game after the update comes out?? Wanna know how to continue because I don't know how to
The game Is very good the phrase "Don't judge the book by its cover" fits perfectly here, and for the first time this is the Game that doesn't have any Typos in it which is a huge plus for me. The H animation are good also the Character sprites are beautiful. The story you portraying is very good too, there's one thing though,I wonder get why this game is not on my collections yet. Anyways a very Good game and looking forward to seeing what you will do on the next update.
Somewhat expected the mystery/ritual part to be non important, but the ending was very interesting. Do you by any chance have a Discord server? If you don't, I heavily recommend making one (and linking here).
I don't know how far I'm into this game yet, but my only complaint is that important non dialogue sounds need subtitles too. When a phone or door bell rings show it in the text box. Same with knocking on doors etc. All sounds and noises like that. It's kinda annoying when someone reacts to a sound that isn't indicated to us the player
Hello I would like to know what kind of programs you use by side Honey Select 2 because and renpy I like to try to achieve something for myself . I have no experience with this kind of work but I really like to increase my own skills in leaning by doing a short story ☺️
Your game is really good so far and i can't wait for more 🤩
I use Studio Neo V2 (which is from the same developers as Honey Select) to model the characters and create the animations. I do almost everything from there. Hope this helps!
It kind of depends on how much time I'm able to spend on working on the game. But I try to release an update within two month after the previous release.
Love the game man! A few things: When you get the chance to spy on anyone, it's misspelled as "take a peak" when it should be "take a peek". There's also a choice you can do where it says "Alice liked that" but the A in "Alice" is lowercase.
Just a few misspellings, nothing too major!
Another thing I was wondering: is there a way to download the music files that play in this game? Not gonna use them, they just sound cool!
Just finished the update and it was awesome! the mystery and books remind me of onceinalifetime, another amazing game by an amazing creator. if this game continues on this path, then im extremely excited to see whats in store for us to discover next. i havent played too many new games, ive just been sticking to my favourite few, but im really glad i tried this one. the characters are interesting, cute, funny and overall really nice. the dialogue is funny, serious when it should be and really well done too! i love a game with a mysterious story and this one seems awesome so far, keep going! :)
I haven't played that game before but I guess that's bound to happen when you use the same program to create the characters. Also, there's no discord server for the game at the moment.
I'm assuming you're playing on android. Wasn't aware that there was no hide dialogue option added automatically so I'll look into adding that for the next update. Thank you for the heads up and I'm glad you liked the game!
Hey! I'm just scrolling through nsfw vn since I finished almost everything from an established developers and saw this, I must say the renders are on-par with the other devs that have the same art style as this. I just hope this gets more attention so it won't end up like other games I saw that gets abandoned. The story is pretty interesting too, Keep up the goodwork, if I have the penny I could've joined your patreon to show my support but I'm just a mere student. And I saw your comment that the game is a bit quick but I can't believe how good it is.
Thanks for your comment! Your kind words mean a lot. Don't worry about not being able to become a patron. The fact that you liked the game makes me happy already. And I have a lot of fun working on the game so I don't plan on abandoning it anytime soon! ;)
Hey Radondy. Made this account just to write to you after reading your replies to the comments here.
While I never will make a claim I speak for everyone, I will speak for myself. You look and sound like an ambitious newcomer to the "scene". One of the types that I personally love to endorse and support. Saying that, I know how hard it can be, eventually, if you don't have a proper work flow.
Most creators start at a certain point with sharing their creations. Generally they either have to study or work at the same time when they get to it. Thinking that if they turn their passion into work with a feasible income, they can quit their less attractive day job. It is in this period of time, this season of trial that most creators are broken. Their original pieces of art garner a lot of attention and support, the pressure building, dripping and gripping tighter. Expectations start to pile up and juggling work/studies, family and your passion becomes tiresome and hard. You soon start to prioritise and generally in the wrong kind of way. Maybe a year or more into a project that has a plausible fanbase and you start to feel the cracks. Your passion has turned into toxic stress and what was once your loved creation, has turned into a constant reminder of how easy it is to fail if you allow yourself to share it with anyone that might expect more.
My advice is, plan ahead. Make a feasible work flow that works for you. Alter it, and modify it so your other parts of your life are easier to handle.
Why should I care? Well honestly I shouldn't. But I'm personally suffering my umpteenth burnout because I keep making the same mistakes. My issue is that I'm predisposed to stress, but I still love creating characters and worlds and sharing it with my base.
The short gist of it all. Please take care of your mind and body, especially your mind, because it is in that beautiful mind that you create these memorable stories into slices of life. From one creator to another - take care :)
Hey man, thank you so much for your comment. I'm sorry to hear about all the burnouts you've had, that sounds really rough. But you mention some important things here. Right now I feel like I have a good balance between this game and the rest of my life. I only work on this game when I have finished all other important things I have to do. And yeah, I spend all my spare time on this game, but that's because I haven't been this passionate about something for a long time. But you're right that it's super important to keep a balance in your life, and your comment is a good reminder that I need to keep my priorities right. Creating a proper work flow is definitely something I need to do as the game progresses. I really appreciate the time and effort you put into this comment! You take care too ;)
Difficult to say but it will take at least a month. But I can asure you that I'm spending all of my spare time working on the game to get it out as soon as possible!
Hmmm, it's very strange that the link doesn't seem to be working as it does work for me. I wonder if others are experiencing the same thing. I definitely need to look at it if that's the case.
As for the Patreon search, I think that's because I am still 'new' to the site so my page doesn't show up or something. But thank you for the heads up and your support!
Really good for a first release, can't wait to see more!
Could tell I was near the end and was ready to comment on learning more about and from the purple eyed girl, jokes on me. Interested in seeing what answers we get next update, as well as what new questions we'll have!
Besides a few wording errors which are honestly minor, I enjoyed it so far for what it is! Maybe sometime after you work on the next few parts you can go back and maybe add some more scenes or parts to the beginning as it did seem to progress pretty fast, unless that's what you've intended to do than by all means don't listen to me lol. But so far Its honestly really nice and I can't wait to see what you got in store for the next version! Keep up the good work!!
I’m glad you enjoyed the game so far! I guess some wording errors were to be expected since English isn’t my first language. And I agree that the game is a bit quick right now. I would like to go a bit slower in future versions, which should be easier now that I’ve introduced everything. Thank you for the kind words and feedback!
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do u guys have discord?
There's a link kinda hidden in the text above
Next Update?
I'll be posting some release dates very very soon... ;)
Anal sex?
It's not in the game yet but will be in the future!
Ignore this allmox1 idiot, he posts this comment on every erotic game on itch.... He's quite the nuisance.
Lol, in every game always the same comment 🥴
Love the game and can't wait for more!
Glad you like the game!
this game dead?
Definitely not! It's just that progress has been very very slow due to some irl stuff. But I'm still working hard on the next update. ;)
version3.rpy around line 296, in label coming_home_after_attack
$ renpy.notify("Sophia didn't like that") $ sophia_romance += 1-> should be -= 1 :D
woops, was already mentioned in the comments. sorry for the double post
It's a good game, I see a lot of potential in it. I liked the relationship development with the characters, the relationships don't seem rushed. The graphics are nice and girl models look great. I liked the story, it's enjoyable and not very complex, but it's interesting to follow. The only significant flaw is the sex scenes, they are standard animatiot from HS2, not much dialogue, which makes the scenes look faded and not exciting, although there was the same problem at the beginning of "Once in a Lifetime" development, so I believe this will be fixed in the future, gaining experience. I've played 100+ AVNs and I see a lof of potential in this novel. I apologize for my bad english, I use a translator as my knowledge is zero.
I’m glad to hear you like the story so far and think it has potential. I really appreciate it! And I’ll try to add more dialogue to the sex scenes in the future to make them more interesting. I did make the animations myself though but I wanted to start with some vanilla stuff first. Once the story gets further along I can start adding a lot more things!
(Your english is perfectly understandable btw, so don’t worry about that ;))
I don't know if this was intended, but in version 0.3, if you select "Convince her to stay out of it", appears on the screen "Sophia didn't like that", but sophia_romance is still +1. Line 297 of the version3.py file. I'm sorry for my bad english.
Wow, great catch! I've updated it right away.
I like ur story and how u developing each character story.Thanks for ur work man.I just wana ask u will there be pregnancy content??
Thank you! And I do plan on adding an option for pregnancy content in the future.
Thank u so much🙂.Best of luck man.
Hello again, the update is great. Models are still on point, especially the new characters. The story is still interesting. Tbh, I can't say much it's just that good.
A bunch of people are waiting for the discord server so I hope we can have that soon. :)
Wow, thank you so much! And I’ll start working on the discord server next week so it should be ready soon ;)
I thought there was a sex scene..? The update just ended without one. I only received the kiss scene from the mom.
That's because you have to beat Sophia in that swimming race, I think.
Yup, you have to beat Sophia in the swimming race in order to unlock it!
thank you! i never unlocked the blowjob scene either, how do i do that?
You need to have a certain amount of points with her, which you get by making the right choices.
Hey want to ask, thanks for releasing it on Android finally!!..... I want to know how can I continue the game without having to start over. Is it possible or are you figuring this out?? And will there be a future interaction with the little sister? Really wanna know excited for the update. Probably the best adult visual novel ever!!
Wow, thank you so much! Are you trying to continue your save from pc on android? Because I don’t think that’s possible. And there definitely will be more interactions with Sarah, but it might take a little more time before she warms up to you… ;)
Not really from pc to Android but I played it on my phone. It's as smooth as it was on pc. Will I be able to continue the game after the update comes out?? Wanna know how to continue because I don't know how to
If you make a save right before the end of this version, you can load that save when the new update comes out and just continue from there.
aight found this game on my threads I'll give a review soon. ^^ hope this game is good.
I'm curious to hear your thoughts!
The game Is very good the phrase "Don't judge the book by its cover" fits perfectly here, and for the first time this is the Game that doesn't have any Typos in it which is a huge plus for me. The H animation are good also the Character sprites are beautiful. The story you portraying is very good too, there's one thing though,I wonder get why this game is not on my collections yet. Anyways a very Good game and looking forward to seeing what you will do on the next update.
Thank you! I'm happy that you liked the game. Though I am curious what the thing you mentioned is why the game is not in your collections yet.
Meaning I should've seen this game sooner But I didn't Good game deserve to be in my collections on itchio hehe.
Hey there, quite an enjoyable first experience!
Somewhat expected the mystery/ritual part to be non important, but the ending was very interesting. Do you by any chance have a Discord server? If you don't, I heavily recommend making one (and linking here).
Glad you enjoyed it! I don't have a discord server at the moment but I plan on creating one before the release of the next version. ;)
Good to hear! Not trying to rush, but it should help you quite a bit with getting even more recognition 😎
Hi, fantastic game with great story. Just a problem on android the text box is a bit too big and sometimes block content.
Thank you! I’m not sure if I can resize the textbox but there will be a button to hide the textbox in the new update.
to be continued?... TO BE CONTINUED?!?!?! I NEED MORE STORY, NOT "tO bE cOnTiNuEd"!!!!
Sorry for being dramatic, but seriously this is a great story so far and I can't wait for future updates.
Thank you, your comment really made me laugh! I'm happy to hear you're excited for the game.
Ok, fantastic game so far, but that cliffhanger is killing me
Does choosing the increased lesbian content lead to cheating? I don't personally mind the girls of harem playing together though
There will be no cheating in the game. It’s just the girls in the harem playing together mostly before or during threesomes.
Cool, that's what I thought, and I'm glad to hear it
I don't know how far I'm into this game yet, but my only complaint is that important non dialogue sounds need subtitles too. When a phone or door bell rings show it in the text box. Same with knocking on doors etc. All sounds and noises like that. It's kinda annoying when someone reacts to a sound that isn't indicated to us the player
I can see how that can be annoying. I’ll be sure to change that in the next update!
Hello I would like to know what kind of programs you use by side Honey Select 2 because and renpy I like to try to achieve something for myself . I have no experience with this kind of work but I really like to increase my own skills in leaning by doing a short story ☺️
Your game is really good so far and i can't wait for more 🤩
I use Studio Neo V2 (which is from the same developers as Honey Select) to model the characters and create the animations. I do almost everything from there. Hope this helps!
Thy very much for your answer ☺️
It kind of depends on how much time I'm able to spend on working on the game. But I try to release an update within two month after the previous release.
This is pretty good so far, definitely a great mix of story and adult themes. Definitely sticking with this one till completion!
I’m really glad you liked the game so far. Thank you for the support! ;)
What program did you use for the models
I used Honey Select 2 to create the models.
Love the game man! A few things: When you get the chance to spy on anyone, it's misspelled as "take a peak" when it should be "take a peek". There's also a choice you can do where it says "Alice liked that" but the A in "Alice" is lowercase.
Just a few misspellings, nothing too major!
Another thing I was wondering: is there a way to download the music files that play in this game? Not gonna use them, they just sound cool!
Looking forward to the next update!
Ah, looks like I still missed some spelling errors. Thank you for notifying me! I'll fix them in the next update.
I wanted to credit the music I used in the about section of the game, but it seems like I forgot. Here are the titles so you can find them online:
Hope this helps! I'll include this information in the next update as well. ;)
Thanks! I'll be happy to help look over anything else if you want :D
Can you make it downloadable on the itch.io app?
Not at the moment sadly, as itchio has a file size limit of 1GB. I plan on contacting them to see if I can get more space.
Ah, alright than!
Just finished the update and it was awesome! the mystery and books remind me of onceinalifetime, another amazing game by an amazing creator. if this game continues on this path, then im extremely excited to see whats in store for us to discover next. i havent played too many new games, ive just been sticking to my favourite few, but im really glad i tried this one. the characters are interesting, cute, funny and overall really nice. the dialogue is funny, serious when it should be and really well done too! i love a game with a mysterious story and this one seems awesome so far, keep going! :)
Wow, you're too kind! Your comment truly made my day. Thank you so much for the support! ;)
I haven't played that game before but I guess that's bound to happen when you use the same program to create the characters. Also, there's no discord server for the game at the moment.
Wish there was a button to hide the dialogue box. I'm excited for future updates, absolutely amazing game.
I'm assuming you're playing on android. Wasn't aware that there was no hide dialogue option added automatically so I'll look into adding that for the next update. Thank you for the heads up and I'm glad you liked the game!
Hey! I'm just scrolling through nsfw vn since I finished almost everything from an established developers and saw this, I must say the renders are on-par with the other devs that have the same art style as this. I just hope this gets more attention so it won't end up like other games I saw that gets abandoned. The story is pretty interesting too, Keep up the goodwork, if I have the penny I could've joined your patreon to show my support but I'm just a mere student. And I saw your comment that the game is a bit quick but I can't believe how good it is.
Thanks for your comment! Your kind words mean a lot. Don't worry about not being able to become a patron. The fact that you liked the game makes me happy already. And I have a lot of fun working on the game so I don't plan on abandoning it anytime soon! ;)
Hey Radondy. Made this account just to write to you after reading your replies to the comments here.
While I never will make a claim I speak for everyone, I will speak for myself. You look and sound like an ambitious newcomer to the "scene". One of the types that I personally love to endorse and support. Saying that, I know how hard it can be, eventually, if you don't have a proper work flow.
Most creators start at a certain point with sharing their creations. Generally they either have to study or work at the same time when they get to it. Thinking that if they turn their passion into work with a feasible income, they can quit their less attractive day job. It is in this period of time, this season of trial that most creators are broken. Their original pieces of art garner a lot of attention and support, the pressure building, dripping and gripping tighter. Expectations start to pile up and juggling work/studies, family and your passion becomes tiresome and hard. You soon start to prioritise and generally in the wrong kind of way. Maybe a year or more into a project that has a plausible fanbase and you start to feel the cracks. Your passion has turned into toxic stress and what was once your loved creation, has turned into a constant reminder of how easy it is to fail if you allow yourself to share it with anyone that might expect more.
My advice is, plan ahead. Make a feasible work flow that works for you. Alter it, and modify it so your other parts of your life are easier to handle.
Why should I care? Well honestly I shouldn't. But I'm personally suffering my umpteenth burnout because I keep making the same mistakes. My issue is that I'm predisposed to stress, but I still love creating characters and worlds and sharing it with my base.
The short gist of it all. Please take care of your mind and body, especially your mind, because it is in that beautiful mind that you create these memorable stories into slices of life. From one creator to another - take care :)
Hey man, thank you so much for your comment. I'm sorry to hear about all the burnouts you've had, that sounds really rough. But you mention some important things here. Right now I feel like I have a good balance between this game and the rest of my life. I only work on this game when I have finished all other important things I have to do. And yeah, I spend all my spare time on this game, but that's because I haven't been this passionate about something for a long time. But you're right that it's super important to keep a balance in your life, and your comment is a good reminder that I need to keep my priorities right. Creating a proper work flow is definitely something I need to do as the game progresses. I really appreciate the time and effort you put into this comment! You take care too ;)
There should be a discord for this game, easy communication and updateannouncements
I mostly use Patreon for that at the moment. But it sure is something I need to look into when the fanbase gets bigger.
when is the next update
Difficult to say but it will take at least a month. But I can asure you that I'm spending all of my spare time working on the game to get it out as soon as possible!
Hi will there be an Android version of this in the future???
There definitely will be! I'm not sure if it will be ready next update though.
The Patreon link on your Main Page does not work. And, searching for you on Patreon also does not work. I also searched SubscribeStar too.
I really liked the game, and I really like getting to know the characters. Hopefully, we will soon learn why the MC is getting blackouts.
I did subscribe through the Patreon link in your introduction here. You are not the first Dev that a Patreon search did not find.
Hmmm, it's very strange that the link doesn't seem to be working as it does work for me. I wonder if others are experiencing the same thing. I definitely need to look at it if that's the case.
As for the Patreon search, I think that's because I am still 'new' to the site so my page doesn't show up or something. But thank you for the heads up and your support!
For me, it seems that Patreon is blocked in my country. i.e. When I used a proxy site it worked. So try that (or a vpn)
What are the tags so far? Looks nice
Not sure if this answers your question, but there's only masturbation right now. There will be a lot more content in future updates!
Happy to hear you liked the story!
Really good for a first release, can't wait to see more!
Could tell I was near the end and was ready to comment on learning more about and from the purple eyed girl, jokes on me. Interested in seeing what answers we get next update, as well as what new questions we'll have!
Had to leave it on a cliffhanger, of course! But I’m glad you’re excited for the next version.
Excited to try it! Currently downloading as I'm typing this lol. The story sounds intriguing and the screenshots so far, all I can say is sheeeeeeesh.
I’m curious to hear what you think of the game!
Besides a few wording errors which are honestly minor, I enjoyed it so far for what it is! Maybe sometime after you work on the next few parts you can go back and maybe add some more scenes or parts to the beginning as it did seem to progress pretty fast, unless that's what you've intended to do than by all means don't listen to me lol. But so far Its honestly really nice and I can't wait to see what you got in store for the next version! Keep up the good work!!
I’m glad you enjoyed the game so far! I guess some wording errors were to be expected since English isn’t my first language. And I agree that the game is a bit quick right now. I would like to go a bit slower in future versions, which should be easier now that I’ve introduced everything. Thank you for the kind words and feedback!